Good art, but the characters aren't very memorable or interesting imo. Also, the game hangs after the blowjob scene and I'm not sure if the problem lies on my end or yours.
Being a visual novel, there isn't really much to do. I enjoy the artwork but that's all there is to this game.
Hmmm, the blowjob scene should lead into the end of day one and a credits screen. Did you unlock the part where Crow joins in? As for the characters, I think we'll have to try harder to make them fun and engaging. We're currently redesigning the opening to the game so that the player has more freedom to talk to the characters and get a feeling for them. We're also going to be adding more mechanics as time goes on so that the game can be more interactive than just a visual novel. Thanks for telling us how to improve our game, hopefully we can impress you more next time! - Hallows
As good as it looks in terms of quality, the inability for me to use any other angle besides doggystyle makes the overall feeling extremely limited. It's a good animation for certain, but damn is it underwhelming. Guess I can't blame you though since it was commissioned this way.
Thank you! :)
Ok I'll start by bashing any asshole in the comments who critisize the art style of this animation.
THEY CAN'T FUCKING CONFROM TO EVERYBODY'S WISHES BECAUSE THEY HAVE A FUCKING LARGE AUDIENCE ALRIGHT? YOU'RE NOT THE CENTER OF THEIR UNIVERSE SO IF YOU DON'T LIKE THE STYLE, TOO FUCKING BAD.
As for general critique, this animation isn't bad but the best word to describe it would be... lacklustre. The content here just isn't up to par to what you usually produce. Granted, there are more scenes and positions but only one cum animation? Not to mention some of the scenes puts the viewer at a distance which isn't exactly a great perspective for a porn game. The extras were pretty lacking too and while the voice-acting was stellar, I personally felt some parts were done over-enthusiastically and sounded really forced.
Nice work in general, but far from the best you've made. I only hope NIer First Assembly will not disappoint.
Let me guess, Tyrano Visual novel builder? Pretty swell way to use it but yeah.
Yep! I definitely don't recommend it. One of the worst game engines I've ever messed around with.
Sorry, but the spoiler for Bron's quest is more arousing to me than this entire game.
That's cool. Everything isn't for everyone. And Bron's Quest will kick ass.
Pretty great overall, cept harley's facial structure looks a liitle too masculine but that's just imo. Other than that, it was really good. Keep it up~!
...That was rather disappointing...
Whoever you hired or improved on the graphics totally deserve a medal.
Is the same girl. We're the same in fact, just with more time dedicated and more resources.
On the v0.10 we said that that was the worst we could do, and we didn't lie :)
I'll be completely honest. From the demo alone, the only thing going good for this game is the amazing graphics and almost nothing else. The lack of variety in the sex scenes as well as lacklustre gameplay design just didn't cut it for me. (Unless you've at tleast allowed players to fool around a little with the actual gaming part) this feels really empty considering how long you've worked on this. And yes, I've followed your work for a really long time. But I'm still optimistic that this could eventually turn out very well so I'll drop a 3 star rating and wait for the next update.
gave 5 stars simply because I missed you.
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